八上模块话题写作M4

外研版八年级上Module4模块话题写作写作要求本模块的话题是“旅游与交通”。在具体的写作中,学生应做到以下几点:1.能运用比较级和最高级对不同的交通方式进行比较;2.能描述一些自己熟悉的风景名胜;3.能制定旅游计划,并进行分析和比较。写作积累【常用句型】It’sthemostcomfortableway,butit’salsothemostexpensive.Themoreinformationweget,thebetterwewilldo.Ajourneybytrainismorerelaxingthanbycoach,butalotmoreexpensive.Differentstudentsgotoschoolindifferentways.Ithinkthebestwayofgoingtoschoolisbybike.Ittakesmeabouttenminutestogettoschoolfrommyhomeeveryday.范文欣赏【典型例题】1假如你是某国际学校的学生,最近你校的网上论坛“Travel”版块里有人询问从伦敦到巴黎的旅行方式。请你根据表格里的信息在论坛里发一篇帖子,介绍相关信息。伦敦→巴黎旅行方式长途大巴飞机火车费用20英镑80英镑60英镑耗时10小时1小时3小时舒适指数★★★★★★趣味指数★★★★★★【审题思路】1.审人称:介绍旅行方式的优缺点时主要用第三人称。2.审时态:文章主要介绍旅行方式的相关信息,主要用一般现在时。3.注意事项:(1)不要仅仅列举表格中给出的具体数字,需通过比较得出结论;(2)注意衔接要自然,可使用适当的过渡连接词。【写作提纲】1.开篇点题:YoucangofromLondontoParisbycoach,planeortrain.2.主体比较几种旅行方式:Travellingbyplane...butalso...Travellingby...but...and...3.总结:Nodishsuitsalltastes.Youcanchooseyourfavouriteway.【优秀范文】2YoucangofromLondontoParisbycoach,planeortrain.Travellingbyplaneisthefastestbutalsothemostexpensiveway.It’snotasinterestingasgoingbycoachorbytrain.Travellingbycoachischeaperthanbytrainorbyplane.Butit’stheslowestwayandnotascomfortableasgoingbytrain.Travellingbytrainisthesecondmostexpensiveandthesecondfastestway.Andit’sthemostcomfortableandthemostinterestingway.Nodishsuitsalltastes.Youcanchooseyourfavouriteway.实战演练如今,很多城市出现了一种绿色出行方式——共享单车(bike-sharing)。它因环保、便捷而备受青睐,但同时也引发了一些问题。请你根据下表的提示以“Bike-sharing”为题写一篇英语短文,提出自己的看法和建议。优便捷,环保,减缓交通压点力,锻炼身体……问乱停乱放,毁损车辆,偷题盗车辆……建文明出行,遵守规则,爱议护车辆……注意:1.短文应包括以上要点,可适当发挥,以使行文连贯;2.文中不得出现真实的人名和校名;3.80词左右(文章开头已给出,不计入总词数)。3提示词:减缓交通压力reducethetrafficpressure毁坏damage文明的civilizedBike-sharingToday,asagreenerwayoftransportation,bike-sharingisbecomingmoreandmorepopularinmanycities.It’sknownthatithasmanyadvantages.Soit’senjoyedbylotsofpeople.Firstofall,it’sveryconvenientforpeopletogosomewhere.Also,ithelpstoreducethetrafficpressure.Therewillbelesspollutionbecauseofbike-sharing.Besides,bike-sharinghelpspeopletakemoreexercise.Inthisway,it’shelpfultopeople’shealth.However,italsobringssomeproblems.Forexample,somepeoplethrowthemawayafterusingbikes.Evensomepeopledamagethem,andstealthem.Inmyopinion,everyoneshouldtrytobecivilizedandfollowtherulesofusingbikes.Aslongaswetakegoodcareofbikes,itwillmakeourlifebetterandbetter,andourenvironmentwillbemorebeautiful.4