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DuringtheNationalDay,myparentstookmetotheBeidaiRiver.Itwasmyfirsttimetoseethesea.[中国^@教*%育出#版网]Thebluewavesbeatontherocksalongtheseashoreandturnedintospray（浪花）.Icouldn′ttelltheseafromthesky,becausetheyweresofarawayfromus.Whenwesatontheseashore,thewavescameandstroked（轻抚）ourbodies.ThenmyfatherandIswamintheseatogether,butmymothercouldn′tswimatall.Shestoodthereandwatchedusswimming.Suddenly,ahill-likewave（一股小山般的海浪）cameoverus.AndIswallowed（吞下）amouthful（一满口）ofseawater.Itwassaltyandbitter（苦的）,butIwasgladtotasterealseawaterforthefirsttime.[来^&%源:中教网@~]NowIoftenthinkofthesea.Howlovelytheseais!IhopeIcangothereagain.习作点评:小作者写了自己去北戴河游玩的有趣经历。通过细节描写来展现海洋的特点：变幻无穷，充满险境。这也正是人们痴迷于海洋的地方。写作练兵场:[中&国教育*%�@版网]请以“Atravellingforsea/lake/river”为题，写一篇关于游玩江河湖海经历的英语作文。要求：50词左右。