专题15读后续写之各种精彩收尾段落一、读后续写收尾的方式:1.画面定格2.对话收尾3.主题升华4.结尾留白5.首尾呼应二、画面定格1.人物动作的画面定格如:(2020杭州高级中学等五校联考)Theystoodthereforamoment,sidebyside,waitingfortherushingholidaycurrentandfortheirplaceinit.Thenthedaughterglancedoverandmomentarilyregardedhermother.Andslowly,almostreluctantly,sheplacedherarmwithapparentlyunaccustomedaffectionaroundhermother’sshouldersandgentlyguidedherbackintothedeluge.如:Hishardworkpaidoff!Holdingthesodatinfirmly,Reubenrushedfortheshoptobuythebrooch.Themomenthegotthebeautifulbrooch,heburstthroughthefrontdoorandplaceditinDora’shand.NeverhadDorareceivedsuchagift.Speechlessandhappy,sheheldhersontightlyintoherarms,withtearswellingupinhereyes.如:Thebutterflycleanedhertearsontheface,“No.”Godfeltabitrelievedandsaid,“Tomorrowyoucanbecomehumanagain.”Butsheshookherheadandsaid,“No,Iwanttobeabutterflyfortherestofmylife...”Thenthebutterflywouldstaytogetherwithherloverforever.Onthetopofthemountain,sheseemedtoenjoythesunriseandthesunsethappilywiththem.2.特殊寓意的写景画面(1)Theskywasabillionpureeyesoflightandthegrassgreenunderfoot,itwasasifnightanddayhadbecomeonebeautifulmoment.Dawnhadcome.天空像是一亿只纯净的眼睛拼接在一起,脚下是青草,仿佛黑夜和白昼已成为一个美丽的时刻。黎明已经来临。(黎明到来的画面)2.特殊寓意的写景画面(2)Dawnsentshimmeringraysovertheplacidocean,bestowingagoldenpathfromtheshoretothehorizon.黎明在平静的海面上放射出出闪闪发亮的光线,留下一条从海岸到地平线横亘而过的金色道路。(黎明到来的画面)2.特殊寓意的写景画面(3)ThecrystalandceruleanwaterwasgentleasIwadedthroughit,thesunsetlikeorangepaintonabluecanvas.当我涉过水晶般天蓝色的轻柔的水时,日落就像蓝色画布上的橙色颜料。(美好日落时的画面)2.特殊寓意的写景画面(4)Thelingeringsunlightwasobliteratedbytherapidlyfallingnight,resemblingapitch-blackcurtaindrapedoverthesky.逗留在天际的最后一缕阳光被迅速落下的夜幕擦除,就像是天空被一层漆黑的幕布覆盖。(日落时的画面)2.特殊寓意的写景画面(5)Themoonundersiegebystarsseemedtolightenthenightbringingforthstarsthatshoneandhungintheblackness.Theneverendingblacknessconsumedeverything.被群星围困的月亮似乎照亮了黑夜,带来了在黑暗中闪耀和悬挂着的群星。无尽的黑暗吞噬了一切。(描写夜空的画面)2.特殊寓意的写景画面(6)Lookingup,IsawthesunshinebrighterthanIeverknewbefore.Isawatreeinthedistanceglistengentlyasitreflectedthesun'srays.Myconsciousnessebbedawaywiththeheat.ItookafewblinksbeforeIlandedwithathud.抬头一看,我看到太阳比我以前所知道的还要明亮。我看见远处有一棵树反射着太阳光,发出柔和的光辉。我的意识随着热度而衰退。我眨了眨眼,然后摔倒在地才猛然回到现实中,恢复了知觉。(特殊寓意)2.特殊寓意的写景画面(7)Dottedwithglitteringstars,thesky,midnightblue,gavethesceneafairytalequality.缀满星光的天空,午夜的蓝色,给了这一场景一个童话般的质量。(神话般美丽的夜空画面)2.特殊寓意的写景画面(8)Kissedbytherainandglistening,thewetgroundiscoldunderfoot.Adenseearthlysweetsmellrisesfromtheground,envelopingeverythingwithinitssoftembrace.潮湿的地面走起来很冷,被雨水亲吻后闪闪发光。一股浓郁的泥土般的香味从地上升起,把一切都包裹在它柔软的怀抱里。(雨后清新的画面)Theraindrummedonthewindow,biddingfarewelltothelastbeamofsunlight.雨水打着窗户,向最后一缕阳光告别。(雨水来临的画面)2.特殊寓意的写景画面(9)TheleavescrunchedbeneathmyfeetasIstrolleddownthestreet.Occasionally,onewouldfallpastme,lightlyswayingastheairgentlycarriedittotheground.我在街上漫步时,树叶在我脚下嘎吱作响。偶尔,有叶子会从我身边掉下来,轻轻地摇晃,缓缓落到到地面。(描写落叶的画面)三、对话收尾(1)Chestersaidhisfathertoldhimhehadtriedtosearchforhimandhisbrother,butbothbrothershadchangedtheirlastnames.“Hedoesremembermeandmyolderbrotherandhetoldmethathe’sbeenlookingforuseversincewelostcontact,”hesaid.ChestersaidhisbrotherhassinceflowntoColombiatobereunitedwithUrreaaswell.Whenaskedhowthereunionwithhisfatherwillchangehislife,Chestersaid,“Igotfamilyeverywhere,soitmightleadtomanymoretripsnow.”(2)WhatwasmostfascinatingaboutthereunionisthatShavialsomovesothers.Nina’sfamilyhadmovedtoabiggerapartment.“I’veheardamazingstoriesaboutdogs’loyalty,butIneverimaginedthissortofthingwouldeverhappentome.Evennow,Icanhardlybelievethisdogtraveledsuchalongdistancetofindus,”saidNina,“Iwouldnevergivethiskindoffriendawayagain.Inevergrowtiredofrepeatingthis—animalsarethemostdevotedandlovingcreatures.Theyneedourloveandcare.”(3)HerhusbandspoketothedirectorofHeightvale,DoloresHaworth.Soonsheofferedhimajobworkingforthecompany.Shesaid,“Hejusthadabrilliantworkingattitudeandisdefinitelythetypeofemployeewearelookingfor.Iwastold,‘Ifhedoesthisforfree,imaginehisjobsifhewasbeingpaid.’Imethimandhewasalovelyandpoliteyoungmanandhehasalreadystartedworkingforus.”(4)…Theyhungallthethingsbacktothewall.JackaskedPaisley,“Areyoureallywillingtoleadatoughlifewithme?”Shepattedawaytheashesonhandsandlookedatthewallswithloadsofstuffonthemsatisfactorily,saying,“Yes!Forme,itisnotasufferingtolive.”四、主题升华(1)Everyonehasonepersontheylookuptoasarolemodel.Tomethereisnoneotherthanmymom.Shehasbeauty,brains,andoneofthebestheartsIknow.Withoutherinmylife,IwouldhavenoideawhetherIcanbea_famous_dancer.Someday,when_I_am_olderandhavechildrenofmyown,IhopeIcanbejustasgreataparentasmymom.(母爱的深远影响)(2)….Iamextremelyunhappyaboutit.Ithinkmoneydoesn’tequalhappiness.Andfreelifestylealsodoesn’tequalhappiness.Therealhappinessisthateveryoneloveseachother,anddoeseverythingusefulforoursociety.Mostofmyclassmatessupportme.Butsomeofthemthinkmoneyiseverything.Inmyopinion,moneycan’ttaketheplaceofeverything,suchasyourlife,yourtimeandyourhappiness.(表达自己的价值观)(4)“Tworeasonsaccountforthatyouwon,”theteacheranswered.“First,you’vealmostmasteredoneofthemostdifficultthrowsinallofjudo.Second,theonlyknowndefenseforthatmoveisforyouropponenttograbyourleftarm.Itisyourbiggestweaknessthatmakes
高考英语读后感专题15 读后续写之各种精彩收尾段落
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